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Language Analysis: “In The Crucible authority and…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 75%: In The Crucible, Arthur Miller reveals how the prioritisation of authority and reputation over truth leads to…
In The Crucible, Arthur Miller reveals how the prioritisation of authority and reputation over truth leads to widespread injustice and moral collapse.Arthur Miller contends that when power and social standing are valued above honesty, individuals are compelled to abandon truth, enabling corruption and the persecution of the innocent.Miller demonstrates that unquestioned authority discourages critical thinking, allowing falsehoods to be legitimised as truth.Miller exposes how the fear of reputational damage motivates characters to lie, accuse others, and participate in injustice.Miller suggests that those who uphold truth and moral integrity pose a threat to power, and are therefore silenced or destroyed.
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 77.5%: In episode 32 of her podcast, Hapsey Happenings, Janelle Tanley seeks to persuade her audience of local…
In episode 32 of her podcast, Hapsey Happenings, Janelle Tanley seeks to persuade her audience of local residents to oppose the planned development by Nature+Adventure group, which she positions as hostile to the interests of the local area. Despite framing the topic as one about which she is seeking opinions – “I would love to hear from you… how do you feel about this?” – Tanley’s primary aim is to discourage support for, and encourage opposition to, the development.
Tanley builds rapport with listeners by sustained a lively, conversational tone. She introduces herself as “Janelle”, implying a familiar, informal relationship, and adopts the podcasting convention of labelling herself “your host”, evoking the positive experience of hospitality and being treated as a “welcome” guest. These techniques set listeners at ease and are further supported by Tanley’s frequent use of inclusive language to refer to “our wetlands”, which develops the impression that she and her listeners have a shared interest and agenda.
Tanley creates the impression that this topic is important by referring hyperbolically to the newspaper being “flooded” with comments and her social media “overflowing”. Both words are semantically connected with an excess of water, and subliminally suggest the idea that the stability of the wetlands is being disrupted. The high stakes associated with this topic are further emphasised through the use of words like “sanctuaries” and “desecrate”, which have religious connotations and implicitly elevate the importance of the wetlands by comparing them to a shrine or holy site.
The text positions Tanley as someone with intimate knowledge of the wetlands, implying that she has good standing to make the case against the development application. She speaks of “frequently” visiting them and speaking “softly” while there, to preserve the “tranquil” sense of “peace”. Once again, this quasi-religious or spiritual language reinforces the level of personal attachment she has to this environment. She supports her concerns by making reference to a “lifetime” of experiencing similar development projects which she regards as detrimental to the local area. In the third paragraph, she juxtaposes the “natural beauty” of the “precious” wetlands with the repeated word “destruction”, symbolising her negative view of the development plan. She refers to such plans being “disguised” as environmentally sensitive, a choice of word which connotes betrayal and deceit, thus framing the developer as untrustworthy.
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 87.5%: With the arrival of Calmer Coffee marking the early stages of commercialisation in Benmore Village, Jonty…
With the arrival of Calmer Coffee marking the early stages of commercialisation in Benmore Village, Jonty Jenkins uses his column ‘Man About Town’ to draw attention to the shifting identity of High Street. Aimed at a local elderly audience, the column and its accompanying cartoon encourage residents to strongly oppose Calmer Coffee, arguing that its corporate presence undermines the suburb’s long-standing sense of community and tradition.
At the outset of his piece, Jenkins opens his article by painting a warm, affectionate portrait of High Street’s charm and longevity, prompting the audience to view the arrival of the new café as both disruptive and unwelcome. The opening lines of the paragraph are steeped in admiration for Benmore Village, as evidenced in Jenkins’ use of adjectives such as “leafy,” “quiet,” and “thriving” to conjure a tranquil, idyllic image of the neighbourhood. By citing local businesses with familiar names like “Bonnie’s fashion boutique” and “Ken’s butcher shop,” Jenkins evokes feelings of intimacy and affection, particularly compelling among older readers who are more likely to have sentimental ties to the area. The inclusive pronoun 'our' embedded within "our small strip of shops" fosters unity among the townsfolk and reinforces a sense of collective ownership, inviting readers to feel personally implicated in resisting rising commercialism, which threatens “the heart of their community.” Jenkins’ heartfelt tone of pride returns when he urges readers to reflect on the butcher’s “65 year” legacy, portraying it as a pillar of communal identity. The cartoon header at the beginning of the article, depicting a smiling man giving the audience a thumbs-up, establishes Jenkins’ credibility by characterising him as friendly, approachable, and a trusted local figure, as suggested by his title ‘Man About Town.’ Building on his ethos, Jenkins briefly reflects on his body of work as a local critic, noting that he has been “warm” in his praise of “successful cafés” while remaining “honest and cool” in criticising those that fall short of the neighbourhood’s standards. The juxtaposition between “warm” and “cool” further bolsters his claim to fairness and integrity. Additionally, Jenkins’ assertion to have “reviewed many” cafés over the past two decades subtly reaffirms his credibility and experience, positioning himself as an authoritative, insightful voice for the community. Through this framing, Jenkins presents himself not merely as a food critic but as a custodian of local values, whose voice carries authority in preserving the identity of Benmore Village amidst the pressures of commercial expansion.
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 72.5%: Australia's rapidly increasing youth crime rate is a source of much conflict within citizens. There are two…
Australia's rapidly increasing youth crime rate is a source of much conflict within citizens. There are two main stances - conservatives such as readers of the Australian who argue that youth crime is an easy fix with disciplinary actions. The other views, being progressive who see the issue as complex, with more context other than the rising crime rates. Writing in the Australian - a national center-right newspaper - Miriko Baragic criticizes the progressive approach and argues that youth crime is a matter of correction, not one rooted in the complexities of victimhood. He aims to establish the conservative viewpoint through mock and praise arguments, influencing the Australian's readers to believe his stance on the correct one.
To establish his argument and the issue's seriousness, Baragic opens his article by arguing youth crime's recent surge is a result of policy failure. He uses high modality words and negative connotations by stating fear of crime should "not" be a problem "paralyzing" societies. By using these emotive words paired with their negative connotation, he coerces his audience to argue that his stance, leaving little room for disagreement. He introduces the opposing viewpoint that youth crime is a "complex" problem, and rebuts it with hsi argument that this issue has an "easy fix". Using such sharp statements indirectly forces readers to believe his argument, and feel that the information presented to them is logical. Ultimately, he is able to persuade his audience of the Australian readers with his expert opinion that there is no other solution that is rational. This persuades the audience and keeps their interests engaged to read further.
Garagic continues by proposing two feasible and efficient solutions -
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 72.5%: Youth crime is an ongoing issue that has spiked greatly in recent years. In response to the constant growth…
Youth crime is an ongoing issue that has spiked greatly in recent years. In response to the constant growth in cases, the public and media alike have adopted varying stances on the issue. Progressive audiences such as parents of offenders and youth activists argue the media only aggravates the issue by presenting the same narrow-minded argument every time, while conservatives such as older Australians oppose this by supporting the information they receive on the youth, in general, being a dangerous bunch of individuals. Writing for the Conversation, Andrew Hickey and Rachel Wallis argue the media’s outlook on youth crime presents a view that only harms society, without showing the full picture of youth crime being a response to societal pressures. The Conversation is a non-profit organization, focusing on creating an open forum for discussion on an array of political topics.
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Language Analysis: Resellers Rethink
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 70%: The society of thrifting has prompted discussion on more ethically approved methods of reselling second hand…
The society of thrifting has prompted discussion on more ethically approved methods of reselling second hand clothes. In her video posted on the Ethical Thrift's social media page, reseller and owner of the Ethical Thrift Felicia Hong endorses thrifting resellers to be more careful and aware in their thrifting practices. By targeting her followers who are also thrift resellers, Hong sets a tone of hope that her audience implement more ethical reselling methods to support and build the thrifting community.
Initially, Hong lightheartedly explores her experience with thrifting while having a lack of knowledge for the ethics, strengthening this argument by uplifting the reselling community. Hong opens her argument by introducing the title, 'Resellers Rethink!' to strengthen the purpose of the opening image depicting a full bag of recycled clothing with clothes nearly folded to the left and blank space to the right. The alliteration of the title forces the audience to look deeply at the intent of the image while understanding the playful tone, triggering the meaning of the image to be that resellers should be leaving clothing for others to also enjoy the thrifting experience and have access to needs, due to the space demonstrating that clothes can be left for others. Hong is celebrating this behaviour using a lighthearted tone elicits a feeling of understanding within her audience of resellers of the effect their thrifting has on the culture of thrifting, reinforcing how thrifting is a cheap method to buying clothes and that others need them to afford their clothes. Hong then continues in a positive tone to turn focus onto her own habits as a thrifter as an example to educate others by using connotations of how she was "diving in" and "meticulously rifling" through clothes. By supporting these connotations with an anecdote of how she too became worried with the "emerging trend" she was participating in, therefore undercutting her own habits. By both using a positive tone and self-deprecating, Hong honors the reseller audiences love for thrifting by making them aware of her own to inform them that the process can become harmful when overused, the audience more open to advice to their own. Therefore, Hong lightly encourages other resellers who may be watching her content for advice to be more awake and mindful in their practices, supporting her hope for more ethical reselling of second hand clothing.
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Language Analysis: A newspaper opinion piece titled "Our…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 72.5%: In the opinion piece "Our Planet, Our Problem," published in The Melbourne Times (2024), environmental…
In the opinion piece "Our Planet, Our Problem," published in The Melbourne Times (2024), environmental activist Jordan Michaels urges Australians to take personal responsibility for climate change, condemning both governmental complacency and corporate exploitation. Through an assertive and impassioned tone, Michaels combines emotive appeals, inclusive language, and rhetorical questioning to stir guilt and urgency in readers, ultimately positioning them to adopt more sustainable lifestyles. The accompanying cartoon reinforces the argument visually by highlighting the destructive consumerism driving environmental decline.
From the outset, Michaels employs emotive and inclusive language to immediately unite readers in shared accountability. The declarative statement, "We are burning our own future," confronts the audience with a collective sense of blame and responsibility. The inclusive pronoun "we" erases distance between reader and issue, fostering guilt while urging collaboration. This is intensified through the metaphor of "burning," which conjures images of irreversible damage. By appealing to readers' emotions and moral conscience, Michaels compels them to see inaction as a personal failing rather than a distant political issue. The tone here is accusatory yet rallying, designed to motivate change through discomfort.
Michaels then shifts to logic and credibility to strengthen the argument. Citing data that "temperatures have risen by 1.5 degrees in the past decade," he builds authority and grounds his emotional appeal in fact. The phrase "the science is undeniable" positions those who ignore
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 65%: We need a better system Key points (Chronological): Climate change is a big issue; point that out first. Then…
We need a better system
Key points (Chronological):
Climate change is a big issue; point that out first.
Then addresses a suggestion to turn to PT
Uses facts and statistics
Flips entirely and changes POV
“Actually, quite a bit” sudden mic drop affect
Using logos and point out the relatable sides of PT, and even gathers universal info
The image seems to show a different perspective, then it will make more sense after the reader reads more
“Having had plenty of experience” is an anecdote.
“Goodbye, punctuality” – a near-humorous outcome, the “IKR” feeling
Using ethos and logos as the author states a near hyperbolic tone, though it seems logical to the audience “twenty years ago”
10% used again
“Crushed like sardines” - metaphor
Adds more info for the readers to relate, maintain the tone for a smooth sail
Using strong emotive language “Sting”
Using ethos like city names
Lastly a wrap up with facts and statistics, leaving a large summation for the reader to keep in mind
Using logic to conflict with the outside issue
Overall, the author uses 2 main issues
Introduction: Rising environmental impacts are an issue with transportation, but it is hidden within the system. “We need a better system” is an opinion piece written by Jamie Florence, a youth activist and a staff writer. She contends that there is a bigger issue within a problem, over climate change. Public transportation is an issue within society as it indirectly impacts the environment, while it’s purpose is to provide a more greener society. Although public transport is an easier and environmentally friendly option, ultimately, the issues it faces causes individuals to turn on CO2 machines, cars. While it can save time and traffic, PT can arrive significantly late, impacting user’s punctuality.
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 70%: Upon recent withdrawal of council subsidy funding 'Our Local Gym', Sandy Gestalt, chair of the gym committee,…
Upon recent withdrawal of council subsidy funding 'Our Local Gym', Sandy Gestalt, chair of the gym committee, presented a speech at an emergency meeting. As the presentation unfolds, Gestalt shifts between a collegial, somber and logical tone, specifically targeting members of 'Our Local Gym's' committee to vote for the opportunity to broaden their reach by tapping into the customer base and marketing expertise of the long live lollies partnership, as an optimistic perspective in a time of crisis.
Gestalt's opening remarks provide an insightful evaluation of 'Our Local Gym's' circumstances, whilst expressing gratitude to committee members, in order to establish trust and a sense of community. To support her argument, Gestalt acknowledges that members have 'worked together', and in an alternate context of the business itself, "worked out together." Through the employment of repetition and inclusivity, this opening statement grants a nostalgic moment - priming members to make the decision to keep facilities operating. Building on this pre-established notion of community, the historical context of 'operation for 47 years', intertwining with the gratitude for the efforts of the gym's members, lightens the argumentative scenes by eliciting feelings of pride and disparity in the threat of it's final moments. Gestalt claims that the magnitude of the issue is soaring, by utilising the hyperbole of 'obnoxiously loud music' and in tandem with the vivid imagery of 'shiny new equipment' and "giant flatscreen TVs", triggering fury and frustration of towards commercial gyms that succeed on the foundations of excessive funding and thriving clientele. It further embodies the condescending nature, urged to be employed, by the committee members, a call to underscore in hopes to join with long live lollies. The 'cause and effect' in claiming that 'Our Local Gym' has never been like that', acts as a tool in transforming gym members from a set of disjointed set of individuals into a unified community. To add additional weight to the core establishment of community and background, Gestalt's finalises this acknowledgement by optimistically reasoning that a 'lifeline' is available, as a distinct contradiction to the pre-consequences of its inaction - the 'privatisation', 'closing' and 'demolition]'. This perfect juxtaposition between the interplay of 'demolition' to a 'lifeline' tempers urgency by asserting that the business holds the embodiment of the members itself, and requires immediate attention. In this establishment of background, and gratitude to the members, Gestalt creates a framework that compels action through an application to pathos.
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 72.5%: SECTION C - Analysis of Argument Recently, residents of Amundsen have expressed their concern about the…
SECTION C - Analysis of Argument
Recently, residents of Amundsen have expressed their concern about the increase in street art they've been noticing around the town. By sharing their complaints in the Amundsen council's private social media group, Cara Ferguson, a resident but also an art therapist, responds with an opposing view. Passionately, she explains to her fellow Amundsen residents, that expression through art can have many positive effects on the artist but also the community, by sparking different thoughts and an appreciation for creativity. Ferguson believes, and intends to persuade her audience in the Amundsen council private group, that it isn't worth challenging the 'murals' as she deliberately avoids using the word 'vandalism' after sharing the definition; highlighting the contrast in the art they are seeing versus what they are describing it as; this being 'illegal'. Ferguson adamantly contends that not all art and graffiti is vandalism.
Cara Ferguson initiates her post by acknowledging that the street art has had many questions, and is even offensive to some, however is quick to condemn that the words 'vandalism', 'inconsiderate' and 'eyesore' is also extremely offensive to the artists producing these creative pieces with the intention for the town to enjoy. In an attempt to generate a sense of support and respect for the murals, she excitedly added a photo to elucidate just how creative these pieces are, which are only adding value and improving the buildings that have previously been neglected by the council. By adding that she is an art therapist, it reinforces for members of the Amundsen Council private group, that they can trust what she is stating as she is an expert in this area; further persuading them to embrace and even back the talented artists within their community. Ferguson confidently outlines the many positive effects art can have on the human mind, enticing her readers and even potentially selling them the idea that they should try art too. Becoming increasingly optimistic, Ferguson explains that art can be appreciated in many forms, creating the effect that there is something for everyone, providing examples of music, reading and television which can inspire them to be creative themselves. Ferguson has invited the members
of the Amundsen Council private group to reconsider their opinion on all forms of art, particularly to accept that murals are also another form of art that is just as enjoyable and beneficial as the ones they may involve in (music, films).
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 75%: Recent matters surrounding the decline of local entertainment venues have led to discussions about the value of…
Recent matters surrounding the decline of local entertainment venues have led to discussions about the value of community spaces in regional towns. In response, Ava, the marketing manager of Toppdale Cinema, publishes a social media post on the Toppdale Community Voice page discussing the importance of preserving the town’s historic cinema in the face of growing competition from streaming services. In it, Ava passionately and at times nostalgically contends that the cinema is not merely a place to watch films but a cornerstone of community life that unites people through shared experiences. Targeting an audience of Toppdale residents and local families, Ava encourages readers to visit the theatre to ensure its longevity and future in the community.
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Language Analysis: how does Oedipus the king present the…
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reverence…Great laws tower above us’ p209 L954In Episode 5 Sophocles reminds his audience of the authority of the gods to determine mankind’s life through Creon.‘it’s better to ask [the god] precisely what to do… I assume, even you will obey the god’s decrees.’ p246-7 L1579 -1581In the exchange between the Leader and Oedipus, divine power that directs human lives is acknowledged – Leader – ‘As for the search [for Laius’ killer] Apollo pressed it on us – he should name the killer’ p174 L317‘Quite right, but to force the gods to act against their will-no man has the power.’ p174 L319Sophocles conveys that mankind’s freedom lies in the gift of free will to make choices to determine his life, however, free will carries a responsibility to make moral and humane choices. Sophocles’ motif of light, underpins Oedipus’ exertion of his will as a man of action, as he confidently asserts that he will ‘bring it all to light [himself]’ 167. L150Oedipus’ determination to uncover the truth and the choices he makes in asserting his free will, confront him with his destiny Oedipus’ exertion of free will by leaving Corinth, places him on a trajectory that inexorably leads to his preordained fate. He reveals to Jocasta that he killed Laius - ‘I brought down these piling curses on myself’ p206 L906Oedipus to Jocasta – ‘What - give up now, with a clue like this? ...Not for all the world!’ ‘I must know it all, must see the truth at last.’ p222 L1160Sophocles creates horror and pity within Athenians and his contemporary audience, allowing them to experience catharsis through the deeper understanding, that is derived from Oedipus' tragedySophocles suggests that freedom of choice often brings pain.Sophocles’ choice of onomatopoeia in Jocasta’s agonised cry ‘Aieeeeee- man of agony’ p223 L1176 confronts the audience with the pain and suffering that often accompanies mankind’s choices.Messenger - ‘The pains we inflict upon ourselves hurt most of all.’ p235 L1360In his determination to find irrefutable evidence from the Shepherd Oedipus’ worst traits emerge, including rage and violence. Oedipus’ peripeteia is enacted as he violently forces the Shepherd to reveal his knowledge. ‘[Oedipus] was born for pain’ p232 L1305 Sophocles positions the audience to pity Oedipus’ anagnorisis and perceive his nobility as he takes responsibility for his own actions.‘all burst to light!...let me look my last on you! I stand revealed at last – cursed in the lives I cut down with these hands!’ p232 L1306
Sophocles conveys Oedipus as a courageous figure through his action in blinding himself – symbolically a submission to the universe and acknowledgement of man’s ignorance.‘’all the pain I caused’; ‘Blind from this hour on’ p237 L1406-1410‘my dark power, what a leap you made!’ p239 L1448‘Apollo – he ordained my agonies…but the hand that struck my eyes was mine, mine alone – no one else – I did it all myself!’ p241 L1467-70Sophocles allows the audience to perceive the logical rightness of Oedipus’ choice to take responsibility and live with the agony of his blindness.‘What I did was best – Don’t lecture me, no more advice. I, with my eyes, how could I look my father in the eyes when I go down to death? Or my mother…Worse yet the sight of my children’ p243 L1499-1505Sophocles encourages the audience to pity and respect Oedipus through Creon’s direction to the guards.‘have you lost all respect for human feelings? ... Get him into the halls…Kindred alone should see a kinsman’s shame. This is obscene’ p245L1459-66In the denouement Oedipus honours the divine order with a recognition that fate is irreversible.‘Well let my destiny come and take me on its way!’ p246 L1598Sophocles choice to conclude the Exodus with a direction that the Chorusaddress the audience directly, allows him to highlight his view that the gift of free will may lead mankind to become the architect of his own demise, as he confronts forces that cannot be overcome and only death ends suffering.The Chorus praises the strength and dignity of mankind, as they call upon the audience to withhold judgement, by reminding them to ‘look on Oedipus. He solved the famous riddles with his brilliance’ p251 L1678The Chorus deliver the lesson that human destiny lies beyond man’s control by a further reminder that, ‘Now what a black sea of terror has overwhelmed him…‘count no man happy till he dies, free of pain at last’ p251 L1684Blindness Sophocles conveys that only the gods hold the power of true knowledge symbolised by sight. As such his characters display various types of blindness symbolic of ignorance. Sophocles motif of sight, blindness, light and darkness underpins the playCharacters refuse to see the truth (wilful blindness) , or wish they had never seen it. The characters suffer agony when the truth is finally revealed and they understand their misjudgement of the power of the god Apollo. Ironically Tiresias who is physically blind sees the truth and wishes he did not. ‘How terrible - to see the truth when the truth is only pain to him who sees!’ p176 L359-60Wilful blindness is displayed by Oedipus, Jocasta and Creon.
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Language Analysis: argument analysis
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 77.5%: section C. Janine Jennings, the CEO of J-store, addresses the 'concerning trends' with employee satisfaction.…
section C.
Janine Jennings, the CEO of J-store, addresses the 'concerning trends' with employee satisfaction. In the medium of a video, she presents her solutions to the audience, the J-store employees, in a concerned and friendly tone. She uses images throughout her video to assist in conveying the contention that J-store cares about their employees wellbeing.
Jennings opens her video by providing context and establishing the issue. She appeals to family values when stating that her and her sister founded J-store, allowing the audience to sympathise with them as they are a family business. She then lists the values she wanted for the store such as 'to stand out and 'to innovate' and intentionally pairs it with thanking the audience for the role they played in 'this success'. By thanking the workers, Jennings acknowledges their hard work, allowing them to feel appreciated in their job. By using repetition when stating that 'most concerningly' of the 'concerning trends' is that 'employee satisfaction is also down', Jennings emphasises the extent of how much the business cares for them. She metaphorically refers to the change they are going to make with 'get[ting] this ship heading in the right direction' and concludes her establishment of the issue by including a call for action, urging the audience to 'listen up'. By using a metaphor, she allows the workers to create a visual image of how J-store is going to improve employee satisfaction, re-establishing her contention that the company cares for their workers.
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Language Analysis: the essay is about the long live…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 62.5%: Due to missing out on council funding, Our Local Gym is under threat of closure due to financial instability.…
Due to missing out on council funding, Our Local Gym is under threat of closure due to financial instability. Sandy Gestalt, chair of the organising committee for the gym has spoken to her fellow members about the need for compromise by accepting assistance from retailer Long Live Lollies. Gestalt aims to remind her audience of the special and unique qualities that their gym possesses in an effort to have members feel a sense of connection to their gym and as such be open to whatever means necessary to keep it open. Members are confronted with the grim outlook for the gym’s future, as Gestalt reasons with them that their only viable option lies with receiving help from an unlikely ally in Long Live Lollies. Her audience is urged to feel protective, hopeful, and responsible, and ultimately to act decisively to preserve their cherished gym.
Gestalt begins by reinforcing the special character of the gym itself, framing it as unlike any other and therefore worth saving at any cost. She describes it as a “safe space” and contrasts its calm, inclusive environment with the “obnoxiously loud” gyms in the area. This comparison elevates the gym as both distinctive and precious, encouraging members to feel pride in what they have created together. Gestalt reminds them of how the gym has given “your fitness, your strength” to the members, creating gratitude while subtly suggesting they owe something in return. By focusing on the unique nature of the gym members can be moved to compromise, as they feel that what is at stake is extraordinary and irreplaceable.
Having established the gym’s uniqueness, Gestalt extends her appeal to the broader community, urging her members to think beyond themselves. She references “young families, refugees and seniors,” evoking compassion and responsibility. In doing so, Gestalt harnesses the altruistic nature of her audience, asking them to imagine the people who would suffer most if the gym were to close. She later describes the partnership as a “win-win,” suggesting not only that compromise is necessary but that it is an exciting opportunity to amplify the gym’s positive impact. This shift broadens the audience’s perspective with Gestalt encouraging them to see compromise not as a sacrifice but as a chance to do more “good” for those who need the gym most. The argument thus escalates from personal pride to community duty, strengthening the moral weight behind Gestalt’s position.
It is from this base of emotional investment that
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VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 75%: As there is a surge in popularity at the River Bakery after being awarded the 2024 #GoldenSlice title, there…
As there is a surge in popularity at the River Bakery after being awarded the 2024 #GoldenSlice title, there has been growing concern in community safety and management within the store. Consequently, Carter Chan, owner of the bakery writes a message to the River Bakery social media, in which he expresses his gratitude for the support, but also disapproves and responds to antisocial behaviour. Addressing his audience of both new and returning customers, Chan aims to show gratitude while also quelling any safety concerns through his social media post, ultimately growing his business in return.
Chan opens the post by immediately gracefully thanking customers for the 'overwhelming support'. Choosing to begin thankful, establishes a trusted relationship with the audience, as he does not seem unhappy with their visiting, and instead positions himself in a positive way to the audience. Chan continues by mentioning their '#Golden slice award' establishing his business as great at what they do, piquing the interest of his audience. By including this in the first few sentences, Chan inclines the customer base to continue reading, with an ulterior purpose of having people visit their store, through credibility of the award. Carter continues by offering a 'wholeheart[ed] apology' to the audience. This is supported by labelling the event as 'unprecedented' and not 'anticipated', leading the whole customer base to see that the poor handling of the popularity surge will not happen again. This encourages the customers, both new and old, to have further trust in the establishment- making them more likely to visit, deliberately done by Carter to form a stronger customer-producer relationship. Carter reiterates this by showing acknowledgement of those who 'travelled lengthy distances', purposefully addressing a specific group in his customer base that may feel least inclined to visit- showing his advanced knowledge of his consumers. This aids his underlining purpose of having continuous visits and profit to his store.
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Language Analysis: “A real home is where there are people…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 60%: Through her portrayal of home in ‘Rainbow’s End’, Harrison underscores that for First Nations people, ‘home’ is…
Through her portrayal of home in ‘Rainbow’s End’, Harrison underscores that for First Nations people, ‘home’ is inseparable from individual’s connection to country, even within a discriminatory society. Utilising the character of Nan dear, Harrison suggests a strong tie to the land through particularly older generations of Indigenous Australians. This is evident through Nan dear’s dialogue of ‘they forced us to leave…our home’, symbolically conveying intergenerational trauma. The noun ‘home’ does not aim to simply reference their place of residence but instead illustrates the character’s strong connection to the land. Additionally, the past tense verb ‘forced’ supports the position that Nan dear suffers from generational trauma, along with many indigenous Australians, where they were removed from the land, where they had a deep connection and a sense of belonging. This further reveals how colonisation stripped Indigenous Australians from the right of choosing their own home, at a place where their cultural identity and sense of belonging would be respected and
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Language Analysis: 2024 VCAA exam - Our Local Gym
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 75%: In response to the council's withdrawn subsidy to Our Local Gym, Sandy Gestalt, chair of the gym's committee,…
In response to the council's withdrawn subsidy to Our Local Gym, Sandy Gestalt, chair of the gym's committee, convened a pivotal meeting to discuss the future of the beloved company. The convivial speech presented to valued gym members in attendance at the emergency gathering, delineates the dire gravity of Our Local Gym's position and endeavours to amalgamate local community members to support the proposed partnership with Long Live Lollies. Gestalt thereby advocates compromise amongst audiences in order to solidify their vote to the savouring change and ensure the gym prospers in the future.
From the outset, Gestalt establishes the familiarity shared amongst participants to the gathering. In projecting the solidified persistence of members who always "work together" in averting "uncomfortable" circumstances, Gestalt elucidates the underlying values of solidarity values within her reciprocal relationship. Thus, the author empowers the cherished members of the gym and ultimately deconstructs her authoritative position as "Chair" of the committee to foster equality amongst all valued members. This convivial approach may therefore endear Gestalt to the familiarised audience, ensuring she can maintain a trustworthy persona. The glorified notions of determination is further conveyed as the basis of Our Local Gym, a "Safe Space" orchestrated by "council support" and the devotion of members. Gestalt thus commemorates the members in attendance to the meeting, as their contribution in "fees" and culture has sustained an opportunistic gym environment. This lionization of members attempts to thereby evoke further support to ensuing propositions, as they are positioned to recognise the "catering" nature of the gym that juxtaposes "competitive" and "obnoxious" commercialised gym venues. This drawn comparison further conveys the implications of this indignant council decision, as Gestalt alludes that members will have little autonomy but to partake in these intimidating environments in the event that Our Local Gym closes. The maintained future of the gym is thus invited as a top priority to attending members.
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Language Analysis: how to improve working from home
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 75%: From the onset, Martin suggests that the company depends on everyone cooperating in tandem to be successful. He…
From the onset, Martin suggests that the company depends on everyone cooperating in tandem to be successful. He opens by acknowledging that over the past few years many workplaces, including their own have done "'their best to keep staff both safe and productive" despite the "challenges". By implying that they have gone out of their way for the benefit of employees, even despite potential hardship by reminding them they had to take on risks for them, it presents the employers as thoughtful and caring about their employees' wellbeing. This would make employees feel grateful for their bosses and feel obliged to do what they say. Martin goes on to suggest that whilst the WFH plans were beneficial at the time, they "come at a cost to our company". In utilising inclusive language when describing "our company", he is leading employees to view the company, not as his, but rather a shared one - placing value of the future on all employees, not just management. This may lead employees going along with the suggestion so as to cut costs in future. Adding to this view of shared responsibility, the Martin & Moloney logo has different hands on top of one another. This
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Language Analysis: Hapsey podcast
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 72.5%: Recently a proposed development plan for 'Hapsey Wetlands' by Nature + Adventure Group has sparked concerns…
Recently a proposed development plan for 'Hapsey Wetlands' by Nature + Adventure Group has sparked concerns among its local Hapsey residents. Janelle Tanley a life long Hapsey resident and local podcaster posts her podcast episode 32, titled 'Hapsey Happenings'. In a concerned and dismissive tone, Tanley argues for the Hapsey community to "consider what is best" for their ecological landmark - the Hapsey wetlands, and avoid to avoid the destruction of their "native" environment. Tanley also appeals to the local Hopsey community and the members of Nature + Adventure group. Accompanying her piece is a cartoon image of the connections to nature upbrings to a society. Also, illustrated a photograph of the consequences of industrial pollution. This complements her piece as the episode to highlight the consequence of development.
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Language Analysis: The argument form was an open letter…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 75%: In response to workplaces adopting new polices after COVID 19 adaptions, Martin and Maloney, a large…
In response to workplaces adopting new polices after COVID 19 adaptions, Martin and Maloney, a large advertising firm has decided to switch to a four day working week. CEO S. Martin alerts his employees of this change via an open letter to all staff. Martin formally, and empathetically contends that his staff consider engaging in four day face to face work or even five days for incentives. By first addressing why work from home polices were implemented, Martin poses these polices as once effective, however, now outdated as the height of COVID 19 is over. Moreover, Martin establishes the benefits of his proposal, and welcomes any feedback for his audience to entertain the idea of returning.
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Language Analysis: In WHALITC it is better to be an…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 70%: To be considered an outsider from any social group is typically seen as prejudiced or uncharitable to those who…
To be considered an outsider from any social group is typically seen as prejudiced or uncharitable to those who are excluded. In the case of the Blackwood family of Shirley Jackson’s 1950’s gothic, thriller “We Have Always lived in the Castle” that appears to be untrue. In the novel Jackson endeavours to highlight what she sees as the benefits to living in isolation, whereas in reality she illustrates the consequences and entrapment of physical and social separation from society. Jackson uses two main social groups to display the useless interactions between them. The main social groups of the novel are the Villagers being the outsiders from the insider’s group of the Blackwood family. In the context of the novel the Blackwood’s can be referred to as both the insiders or the outsiders as the perspective of which group is considered as insider or outsider depends on the reader. In this interpretation the immediate Blackwood family will be explored as the insiders and others such as the villagers and cousin Charles will be analysed as outsiders to the Blackwood’s. However, the consequences of being an insider or an outsider differ depending on the character. For Mary- Katherine (Merricat), Jackson depicts her with the most amount of niche insider groups with little movement in and out of those groups, highlighting the benefits of being an insider for Merricat. Whereas for Constance she appears to be involved in more social groups that interact with the outsiders, suggesting that for her being an insider may impact her life and cause her to suffer. Conversely, Cousin Charles despite being a member of the Blackwood family is not considered an insider, initially by Merricat and eventually by Constance and Uncle Julian as well, emphasizing that ignoring Charles’ desires to be an insider that he is still considered an outsider. Overall, the categorisation of characters into both internal and external social groups of the Blackwood family benefit some characters more than others.
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Language Analysis: VCAA 2020 Drone Article
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 80%: The rise of recreational drone use and the threat that this poses to the farming industry of Victoria’s Shire…
The rise of recreational drone use and the threat that this poses to the farming industry of
Victoria’s Shire of Byways has been a point of concern. In response, Warwick Bandle’s
speech at the shire’s council meeting implores that rigid licensing procedures must be
implemented for both recreational and commercial drone use, to ensure the prosperity of
both the farming and tourism industries. Speaking with an urgent, and at times, confounded
voice, Bandle appeals to the wider Byways Shire community with particular focus on its
council members in an attempt to raise awareness of the dangers posed by recreational
drones in their present state and prompt action towards more rigid regulation of their use.
Bandle begins with an ominous depiction of the threat that inept drone usage presents to
the valued farming industry. Impugning that the unskilled engagement with such
technologies is a ‘costly problem’ for ‘us farmers,’ he appeals to his listeners’ hip pocket
nerve, utilising ‘us’ to quickly include all farmers as victims of this economic threat, and thus
imply that his concerns should, too, be of their utmost interest. As he prompts readers to
‘just imagine’ these ramifications, he imparts a sense of limitlessness and immensity to
them, thus crafting the need to address them as all the more imperative. Providing
materialistic examples of these consequences, he alliterates that the inexperienced users of
these drones may come ‘crashing through crops’ in pursuit of their fallen vehicles; an
audible attempt to evoke the concern of his listeners who are farmers – and heightened by
the barbaric, destructive connotations exuded by the verb ‘crashing.’ This is visually
reinforced by his accompanying photograph, depicting one of such drones wedged at a
cumbersome angle in an expansive patch of grass that is likely representative of farmers’
precious land – and thus the physical damage that such technological malfunctions may
induce. Further, the jovial body language of the person in pursuit of the drone –
characterised by her impractical dress and cardigan as someone who is likely not a farmer
herself – elicits an air of ignorance towards the damage she is inadvertently, and likely
unintentionally, causing.
Bandle then moves to implore that Byways’ farming industry deserves a higher level of
concern as such an intrinsic component of the Shire’s prosperity. As he asserts that these
workers are Byways’ ‘backbone,’ this metaphor imparts notions of dependence and
reliance, thus, insinuating that the Shire will be somewhat dysfunctional in the absence of
the farming industry, thus, elevating the importance with which it is prioritised. Affirming
that the workers of this industry have resided in the area ‘for generations,’ he constructs a
sense of longevity to their existence and value. This serves as an understates juxtaposition
to the fleeting, short-lived nature of ‘the tourists’ who are currently of the council’s express
concern, thus, positioning such as order of priority as all the more trivial and in need of reevaluation.
Bandle’s focus then takes a shift, as he explicitly expounds the value of drones
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Language Analysis: 2024 VCAA exam section C
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 70%: Since the termination of the funding towards Our Local Gym fitness club, many from the Gym committee have begun…
Since the termination of the funding towards Our Local Gym fitness club, many from the Gym committee have begun to question the consequences of the future of the club. Notably, Sandy Gestalt, the chair of the Our Local Gym committee, speaks to the members of the gym, voicing the concerns regarding the council subsidy being withdrawn. She supports her assertion that in order for the club to continue thriving, the members must vote upon the merge between the club and Long Live Lollies. Gestalt addresses not only the members of the committee, but more indirectly the wider community of the customers those responsible for exacerbating the situation, to present her message with efficiency - in hope that direct action, will be taken for the future of the Gym.
From the outset, Sandy Gestalt overlays the significance of the Gym through it's inclusion and intentions - candidly illustrating the magnitude to which the Gym must remain standing. By beginning the speech with a concerned yet hopeful voice Gestalt recognises the ability for the committee to "work together" to save the Gym, followed by a pun, "worked out together". By incorporating a combination of humour & inclusive language, Gestalt appeals to her direct audience by beginning on a positive note, thereby encouraging hope and from the members while also offering them authority and control in determining the future of the Gym. Furthermore, Gestalt shifts to comparing Our Local Gym to other competing Gyms, yet through this comparison she bluntly reveals her bias through the use of connotated terms. While referring to her Gym as "safe", "young-at-heart" and "accepting", while she frames other local gyms as "competitive", and "obnoxious", Sandy Gestalt utilises juxtaposition to capture the inclusivity and welcoming nature of Our Local Gym, while framing other surrounding Gyms as simply materialistic and judgmental, thus signifying the necessity for the Gym to continue running as it attracts a wide range of locals, as oppose to other Gyms. This, incidently, inclines the committee members attending the meeting to side with Sandy Gestalt and support the movement in saving the Gym.
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Language Analysis: The music venue The Salty Boot is…
VCE Language Analysis essay scoring 70%: AA practice - The Salty Boot Following an increase of noise complaints within an inner-city suburb of Metropolo…
AA practice - The Salty Boot
Following an increase of noise complaints within an inner-city suburb of Metropolo in Melbourne, local rock musician, Vince D'Angelo campaigns against the closure of 'the Salty Boot' music venue via his speech in the campaigning rally. Due to the increase of population within the area, the residents are claiming that the music venue is "too noisy", and that the community would benefit from its removal. D'Angelo protests against these claims, contending that the venue is a vibrant space for individuality, creativity and music lovers to unite.
Opening with a heartfelt tone, D'Angelo establishes The Salty Boot as a "beloved" environment for the music lover audience. He heavily implies a binary opposition between the supporters of the Salty boot and the "naysayers and complainers" who wish for it's closure, promoting a deep connection with the music lover audience, creating a supportive environment. Continuing with a sarcastic tone, D'Angelo exposes recent statistical evidence promoting the protection of the music venue, with over "80% of Melbourne residents" wanting the venue to remain open, despite the protestors who argue that the venue is "too loud" and "too colourful". This inclusion of evidence paired with the juxtaposition of beliefs creates a tense environment in which the audience is encouraged to evaluate the communitie's values and determine the true nature of the situation, with a majority of people engaging positively with the venue. D'Angelo continues his attack against the protestors, sarcastically claiming that the removal of the music venue will result in a "boutique hairdressing salon" or "hip cafe", businesses that lack the vibrancy that the Salty Boot brings to the neighbourhood, promoting a sense of justification in the audience to preserve a creative, fun environment in a changing community.
AA - The Salty Boot